Classic passive voice in this tease. Do better.

How about correct subject/verb agreement in active voice: US Marshals Catch a suspect accused of stealing.... instead of what KING reporter Natalie Swaby teased on camera.

"A suspect accused of stealing millions from a dead man's Issaquah estate IS caught. Coming up, I'll tell you where US Marshals found him." Awful writing.

Put the doer of the action first, the US Marshals. Fundamental in broadcast writing. Active voice.

Active voice occurs when the subject of a sentence directly performs the action expressed by the verb. It follows a clear, direct, and concise Subject/Verb/ Object structure, making writing more dynamic and engaging.

Speaking of writing, here is a nice interview about my two books - decades apart, one non-fiction, one fiction. from allauthor.com.

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Rebecca Stevenson has left KOMO

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Where is Frankie?

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A Farewell to this Fox 13 Seattle host

Carly Henderson - co-host of Studio 13: Live - was laid off in the recent KCPQ expansion which we broke. She posts her goodbye on FB. She never really clicked on the pay for play lifestyle mid-morning show. It will be cut to a half hour for awhile and moved to 10 a.m, according to reports, before moving back to 11 on Aug. 4. And I am told it will remain 30 minutes, not be re-expanded to an hour. Thank goodness. https://www.facebook.com/share/p/16HFRSYM8x

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